Third Place Stories...

The summary for Play Fair says it all. County fairs have got the greasy foods, the stuffed toys, the rides, the games…and ferris wheel sex. Sexing it up, high about the ground with hundreds of people below is just about as public as you can get. Whitney Love and Zephyersky show us a perfect display of what can happen when you’re at the fair and you just can’t wait.

These wonderful authors start this story off with plenty of UST that almost make you melt. The group of Edward, Bella, Jasper, Alice, Emmett, and Rosalie are having a post graduation celebration and decide to go to the county fair. Edward and Bella cannot keep their hands off each other as they walk around, playing games and winning prizes. Bella continually reminds herself that they will leave eventually and go to their usual spot to get it on, but she’s having trouble controlling herself, and Edward clearly is too. The first indication that they will not be able to stop themselves is when they ride the Tilt-a-Whirl, and Edward sneakily removes Bella’s panties. The way in which these ladies write this scene is hotness all on its own. So Bella is now walking around the fair Commando style, and they come to The Ferris Wheel. Edward has an aversion to heights, but Bella intends on making this the ride of his life.

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I was still bare underneath from Edward removing my panties on the Tilt-a-Whirl. He had brought me almost to that point of no return and then stopped, trying to do anything to get me to agree to leave the fair. Little did he know that if he got me off I would've agreed to do just about anything.

"Luckily no one below us can see through this bench," he murmured against my mouth stilling his movement and pulling his hand away. "I'd hate to think they might get a good look at my girl." I couldn't help but smile and let out a little giggle.

"You're the one that stole my panties," I said stretching my tongue out to run across his lips then quickly pulling away.

"The thought of you with nothing on underneath drives me insane. You can't imagine how much I need you right now baby," he said smiling his beautiful crooked grin at me. I could see his green eyes turn darker.

"I think I have a pretty good idea Edward," I said winking at him. "But you can show me anyways."

Edward cupped my cheek with his hand, bringing my lips back to his. Caressing my jaw and cheek with his thumb, he shifted slightly so more of his weight pressed against me. The chair tipped back and I let out a startled cry, wrapping my arms tighter around him. He tucked his head into my neck, breathing deeply trying to catch his breath.

"You know I damn well hate the Ferris wheel Bella," he said gripping me back tighter than necessary. All I could do was smile.

I decided to show him that the Ferris wheel didn't have to be all-bad. I wiggled until his arms loosened around me a little. My hand went to his bulging crotch, my fingers opening the snap of his jeans quickly. The soft rasp of the zipper in the still night was all I could hear until his breath starting coming more raggedly than before.

"Maybe I can change your mind about the ferris wheel," I said. "Make it one of your favorites instead.”

*****

This one-shot was well-written, adequately smuttastic, and caused me to never be able to look at a ferris wheel the same way again. We got UST, foreplay, and hot above-the-ground sex all in one short story! Whitney Love and Zephyersky did a brilliant job at building sexual tension between the characters, then giving us a very satisfying climax in the end.

You’re at a club. You’re dancing, feeling the music, the beat, swaying under the bright lights. You’re also making love to the person you go there for every night…in front of everyone. AydenMorgen wrote Rapture, a smoking hot public sexing story that takes place in the midst of the crowd.

Bella goes to the same club every night, and every night Edward watches her dance. The connection between them is overwhelming, almost animalistic. The other club goers are always unaware of what takes place as Edward goes to her and slowly begins to move his hands along her body, making her beg for more. Their dialogue and constant declarations of their want for each other is insanely sexy to read. He teases her and touches her while everyone else is oblivious to what’s happening right next to them. It keeps progressing, and eventually they always give in to their passionate desires. They both know it will happen again, and it will be just as intense as the time before. The story is simple and straightforward but incredibly emotionally as Bella and Edward make love while the music blares and lights shine down on them.

*****

No one ever saw what he did to her on the dance floor.

Every night, he invaded her body. Every night, he claimed her. And no one ever noticed, not even when his cock slipped between her folds and left her sobbing in pleasure.

God save her, she loved it. Loved the way he played her body, turning her into someone she didn't recognize and didn't know. Loved the way her moved around her, inside of her, driving her to madness time and again.

"Do you want me?" He asked again as her body began to quicken to his touch, every muscle tightening in anticipation of the explosion about to rock through her. "Here? Now?” His cock pressed insistently against the flesh of her ass.

"Please Edward," she pleaded with him in harsh pants and quick gasps, writhing beneath his touch with her eyes still trained on the oblivious crowd grinding around them. "Oh God, please."

She was going to explode. Any minute, her body was going to fold in upon itself in pleasure, her bones melting as he drove her over the edge into mindless, senseless pleasure. But he would not let her fall yet.

It was too soon.

His fingers slowed as her walls threatened to clench and then slid from her body altogether.

She cried out at the loss of sensation, her hand fisting harder into his hair and jerking his head backward.

He hissed in pleasure and pain at that rough touch, his hips bucking roughly into her.

"Taste yourself," he commanded, sliding his hand up her body and to her mouth. "Taste how sweet you are. How ready for me you are.”

*****

This one-shot was amazingly emotional and intense in its writing. AydenMorgen perfectly captured the mood of a nightclub as one gets lost in the music and atmosphere. Couple that with passionate sex with Edward right in the middle of the dance floor and you’re given an intoxicating experience that leaves you breathless.